shredded

I love how her breasts look. For lack of a better term it has a perfect gravity. The shoulders are better aligned with the body and definitely more defined. The hands looked a little small for the body so I have gradually made it bigger so it is more proportional to the arms.

The legs are going to be next and I'm checking anatomy books to make I got the muscles right. The hips look a little too small for her size that will be adjusted by the next time I post....

Stay tuned......

Shredded continued ...

Finally I feel I've gotten to the point where I can post and show my progress. The waves were created by a mix of Prussian blue, titanium white, and cobalt and other earth colors. The waves that are crashing mimic her internal and external struggles. I like the way the crest turned out and the surf. When I made this i was thinking about the line from Still Here, where he says " My hopes the wind done scattered" I depicted that thought crashing of the waves.

The bird on her shoulder is going to eventually be shown picking at her jugular vein. Like a vulture scavenging for food. The bird depicts the Nay Sayers, the people, the things, and situations that we let destroy us. I thought of the part that Langston Hughes wrote, "Looks like between 'em they done tried to make me stop laughing, stop lovin', stop livin-"

This the full view of what I've done so far. I really like the way the background is turning out. I love how all the same colors dance through the painting to give it a sense of cohesion. I'm pretty happy with the composition and i wanted it tight on a long canvas without much width to show her confinement. The sand, the hands, the dress and the skin tone will be the new things that will be worked on for my next post... I will persevere.

Shredded cont...

I really didn't realize how big the feet appeared... it will be fixed. I really like the ballooning of the skirt caused by the wind. Next I'm going to start working on the hair and the chest, and work on the birds to get the color right. I still don't know what color I want the shoes though. i started using this medium called Neo-megilp that works like the maroger medium used by the dutch masters but without the fumes. I've basically ceased using my stand oil and other spirits. Now I can confidently paint in my small apartment without fearing of inhaling dangerous fumes.

Shredded

This is a painting I'm finally working on drawings and sketches I've been doing for sometime a correlates with one of the poems i like as part of my poem series I was working on. I really like the proportions of the woman's petite body. I want to call it shredded or may be name it after the poem.

The name of the poem is Still Here by Langston Hughes. The poem speaks on beating battereed and beat down by the world but contineuing ti persevere. The power of perseverance and pushing through are one of the the many life lessons I really believe in and I am costantly being shown day by day, as I struggle with my life's passion.